I've Fallen And I Can't Give You Up

by @jerrypettit

Liner Notes

SONG #50!!!! YAY!!!!

Might be finishing more with a whimper than a bang (my girlfriend said, and I quote, "...not my favorite one"--I'm still crying myself to sleep over that one), but...hey, I finished!

Not intending to do any more "original" songs this season--travel plans and...burnout. But tomorrow I'm going to upload an AI-generated song that I did lyrics for that was my first effort with UDIO.com and which I was pretty amazed at. (My Facebook Friends here may have already heard it). We can be "Haters" about the AI effect on songwriting--but it's here and it's going to stay...and it DOES write a pretty good (even great now and then) song. So we can whine about it or y'all "lyrics only" songwriters could explore Suno and Udio and get a little more "well-rounded". Point being: Listen to tomorrow's song--it's pretty amazing!

And I hope you enjoy this song! (More than my girlfriend did...[Sob!])

Lyrics

I'VE FALLEN AND I CAN'T GIVE YOU UP

Words & Music
By
Jerry Pettit
Facebook.com/JerryPettitMusic

I've fallen down a rabbit hole,
deep and dark, my dear,
A world so strange and twisted,
but still, I feel you near.
The shadows of your love,
they haunt me through the night,
A labyrinth of memories of
when things were alright.

CHORUS:
I'VE FALLEN AND I CAN'T GIVE YOU UP
My heart's a broken record,
a tempest in a teacup.
The stars they may collide,
and the world may fade away,
But I'll be by your side,
in the chaos come what may.

A phantom you've become,
a ghost that's in my head,
Your laughter and your voice,
echoes of the things you've said.
I dance with your shadow
in the moonlight's cold embrace,
Searching for your spirit
in the darkness of this space.

I'm lost in your gaze, your touch,
your love so tough,
I beg for your attention
for too much is not enough.
Can't you see it's killing me,
this love we have made?
But I'm addicted to the high,
and I can't walk away.

CHORUS:
I'VE FALLEN AND I CAN'T GIVE YOU UP
My heart's a broken record,
a tempest in a teacup.
The stars they may collide,
and the world may fade away,
But I'll be by your side,
in the chaos come what may.

In this galaxy of chaos,
you're my one true love.
I see you and your beauty
in the simple stars above.
The universe may shatter,
but our love will still stand,
And I'll hold onto you,
with my heart in your hand.

CHORUS:
I'VE FALLEN AND I CAN'T GIVE YOU UP
My heart's a broken record,
a tempest in a teacup.
The stars they may collide,
and the world may fade away,
But I'll be by your side,
in the chaos come what may.

© 2024, Jerry Pettit

Comments

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Your songs always feel like a trip down memory lane. I hope you keep on doing what you do. It's so nice to hear your music.
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Well fawm you can write a song about how you felt with this rejection! Good lines as usual! It is very busy! Just quietly I like it!
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What a great title, and so nicely written around your theme! Really well crafted lyrics - "in this galaxy of chaos" and "a labyrinth of memories" stood out to me. I also love the chorus - my favorite line is "My heart's a broken record". I have stopped asking my husband for feedback. I know he thinks a song is good when he overhears one and says - is that one of yours ? 😆
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The title reminded me of an old commercial, Help, I'm falling and I can't get up, but what you've got is very clever and plays on falling of a different kind. Another really good, smooth sounding tune I enjoyed listening to.
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its a great title and a pretty good song. maybe not your best, but well worth several spins.
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@sbs
Great title!
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Sorry your gf didn't like this. I think it's pretty cool. Maybe its the clavichord(?) that she doesn't like. Is that guitar? It's sounds harpsicordy or something. Anyway, I had to snicker about the title. I think that's a fun and clever turn a phrase.
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Sounds great to me!
And actually, if your girlfriend sees this as not one of your best it's maybe a compliment about how good the others are!
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What's not to love? It's great to my ears! I hate this to be your last-you have so much talent!
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Let your girlfriend listen to your song again, Jerry. It's gorgeous. I've enjoyed my listen. Congratulations on 50 songs. I'm looking forward to your collaboration with AI. I don't belong to haters but I belong to notknowings what to do with songs where AI is participating :)
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