Tongue-Tied

by @philkmills

Tongue-Tied
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Liner Notes

#filk #pratchett

Re-reading "Wintersmith" was interesting enough that I couldn't stop at only one song. This is related to a character who may be in love, but definitely hasn't transitioned to human. That leaves him acting like a socially-inept boy who has never thought about relating to girls before.

Lyrics

Standing in the snow, staring at his shoes,
Can’t form words ‘cause he doesn’t have a clue.

Tongue-tied (Tongue-tied)
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Dumbstruck boy holding back a flood tide

Turns his head away, biting on his lip.
Thoughts collide ’til they’re broken little bits.

Tongue-tied (Tongue-tied)
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Dumbstruck boy holding back a flood tide

Follows her around, staying out of sight
She can’t see, but he’s hoping that she might.

Tongue-tied (Tongue-tied)
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Dumbstruck boy holding back a flood tide

When he’s got it right, looking in her eyes
Then he’ll say what he’s tried to memorize

Don’t doubt I love you
I’m always thinking of you
Though the time that I shoved you
On the ice
Wasn’t nice
But, you see, I’ve been changing
And the life I’m arranging
You won’t find as a strange thing
With our kids
Who’d forbid
My obvious affection
My provision of protection
And forgiveness for rejection

Stop it! No!
Just, “Hello.”

Tongue-tied (Tongue-tied)
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Dumbstruck boy holding back a flood tide

Tongue-tied (Tongue-tied)
Tongue-tied (Tongue-tied)
Blurt it out or let it build up inside

Comments

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The guitar sounds gorgeous here, great playing! And the call and response chorus is brilliant. Very cool and inventive little spoken section too, really breaks up the song nicely. Great write!
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This touched me, somehow. You really captured this troubled little boy. I love the tone of your guitar. Very nice!
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In an age where there are many of our kids awkwardly shapeshifting in their own way in the queer community, this song strikes me as particularly relevant today. The call and response back up vocals were a great touch.
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The song would greatly embarrass the character in question! Deservedly so.
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Nice word imagery there, especially "Thoughts collide ’til they’re broken little bits."
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