Quicksand

by @songwritingzen · @cindyrella

Liner Notes

When a lyricist like @cindyrella suggests a song for you to put music to, you need to take that suggestion seriously and this lyric is a rocker from way back. Vocals and guitar are all one take. Love it :)

Lyrics

Quicksand
© 2024 Cindy Prince
Music: C. Stewart

I didn't look
Until it was too late
I didn't reflect on
What was to be my fate

I didn't realize
The depth of your deceit
Didn't know I was sinking
Until it was over my feet

Chorus
It was like quicksand
I was totally trapped
I was stuck in the muck
All my strength was zapped
So hard to understand
Going down, going down into quicksand

I didn't think
About the dark side of you
I couldn't imagine
The depths you would go to

I didn't walk away
Now I find myself in this mess
Yet I know in my heart
I couldn't love you any less

Chorus

Bridge
Were there signs I refused to see?
How could you do this to me?

Chorus

Outro
It's getting hard to breathe

Comments

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I love this hook and the way it's used. Love the choice to make this a rocker. Sounds nice and heavy and super catchy. Off to hear the full band version ;)
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Awesome collaboration! @songwritingzen's driving acoustic rock is perfect for @cindyrella's terrific lyrics!
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If you let me have a copy of this I will put drums and bass on it. daveyboy103@gmx.com
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I love this, the guitar almost sounds synthesized. Great vocal delivery and asver @cindyrella 's words are great.
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Wow, this is very solid. as beacon said: I can imagine this being a stadium banger!
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Beautiful song, very sincere, inspirational and moving. Gorgeous lyrics, music, singing and playing. Very catchy and memorable.
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This is a banger. I could imaging with some more backing instrumentals this would rock a stadium.
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Catchy hook. I can imagine this with full rock band backing being played on rock radio.
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Oh I like the dark tone to this - perfect for these lyrics. Great build up to that chorus. This is so good - what a performance. Great melodies, nice dynamic contrast and I love the energy and intensity - wow!! What a collab!
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Top drawer stuff! Cindy's words were already really impressive and Corey elevates them to stellar status with a dynamic performance worthy of the very best!
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Jeez, Cindy--these are some of your best lyrics ever. I wish I could be like Corey and do these songs in "one take". SUPER great job on the guitar/vocal, Corey! Terrific, terrific collaboration.
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Hello Calvin and Cindy, Douglas Murphy here. What a great collab and yes you are right Calvin Cindy can pen them. :) Are all the words Cindy's?
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This is rocking brilliance!! Can't hold still with this! I just love everything about it! You sunk it😉!! Thank you!!
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