The Cold Side

by @wondertruly

Skirmish: Horror (@atornberg)
The Cold Side
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#acousticonetake #singersongwriter #horror #skirmish

It wasn't until I finished that writing this that I realized the verse structure is almost identical to "Count the Fingers"--oopsie! Guess that'll take some reworking back in the real world. But here's my skirmish for the "horror" prompt!

Lyrics

Flip the pillow over to the cold side
Never mind the noises coming from your closet
Or under your bed

Regroup–did you take your melatonin?
Sleep through the poltergeist shaking the nightstand
Drawing letters in red

Are they really there if you’re the only one who sees them?
Seems like you’re losing your mind
Give it a rest
Give it a rest

Read it backwards in the mirror
Someone else’s breath fogs up the glass
Drawing lines in the sand

Last night, someone flushed your medication
Squeeze your eyes shut and try some meditation
Fighting, hands tied behind your back

Are they really there if you’re the only one who sees theM?
Seems like you’re losing your mind
No, it isn’t fair, nothing that you try will appease them
Please, believe we’re on your side
Give it a rest
This is not a test

‘Cause nothing, no horror
Neither living or undead
Could stand a chance against the monsters in your head

Flip the pillow over to the cold side
Never mind the voices telling you it’s nothing
It’s not nothing

Are they really there if you’re the only one who sees them?
Seems like you’ve gone and lost your mind
Somebody really cares enough to reach you from the outside
Find a way to be kind
So you can lay them to rest
Lay them to rest

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Yeah, I got immediate Voltaire vibes too.

Just wasn't aware anyone but Voltaire was....able to do that, so....

Very well done indeed.

Probably the most enjoyable song I've heard in years, to be completely honest.
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What an interesting lyric! Also a lovely melody. And you've go a great voice. I can see you performing this in concert. Terrific!
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I like it a lot. Especially the variations in the way of singing at the end.
The "someone else's breath fogs up the glass" sounds very terrifying to me ! I like the way you bring the idea it might be coming from the character's imagination, and that makes it even more horrific, the fact we can't know for sure.
It reminds me of the song "goodnight demon slayer" by Voltaire. Though the image of monsters in the bedroom serves a different idea.
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Strong melody and very nice accompanying guitar..the sing so strong as always
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I really like the spirit in the night theme.
Your vocal and melody sound great with the acoustic guitar backing.

As good as this sounds... I would sidle up to the Cold Side.
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Holy wow man. Why are you not on the radio? Playing this these great songs to great masses. I particularly liked this song The darkness the illusion of mental health the the horror TV show movie or book feel just there's everything about this song is really appealing your voice your guitar playing arrangement thank you for sharing your your talents and your skills and maybe a little bit of your weirdness.
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Nice, spooky! Great take on that skirmish. You nailed it
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This is so beautifully creepy!! Brilliant song concept - the cold side of the pillow - and wonderful imagery and story telling. I also really like the structure and the gorgeous melodies. Love it!
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Oh this is so wonderfully spooking! I love the lift into the chorus! I love the horror theme nods and the psychological thriller! And your delivery is incredibly good!
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Your voice is so beautiful! I felt all the emotion! great skirmish :)
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I love this song! I don't know "Count the Fingers" but this is very catchy and gives a feeling of dread. Nice work!
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I love this take on the prompt! Very relatable lol. The melody is incredible & creepy! Really great vocal performance. And I love the guitar rhythm. Great skirmish!
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Great, realistic and realistically creepy, scenario! You melody has an eerie edge to it, too. I love the build into the chorus. Very well done!
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