When I'm With You (I don't need luck)
by @tcelliott
NSFWLiner Notes
For Phoebe
Challenge: Use only one rhyme in a song (and not suck.) Written from the songfight title "I Don't Need Luck"
#americana #folk #altcountry #songfight
Lyrics
I don't need no luck when I'm with you
I don't need no luck when I'm with you
Luck don't have a thing to do
With all the shit we've been through
When I'm with you
When I'm with you
When I'm with you
I won't wish upon a star for you
I won't wish upon a start for you
You're the first thing I ever knew
That I would never doubt to be true
When I'm with you
When I'm with you
When I'm with you
When I have bad dreams I run to you
'Cuz no-one else can calm the beast like you
I'm a better man when I'm with you
I'm a better man when I'm with you
I don't have a thing to prove
Whenever I'm next to you
When I'm with you
When I'm with you
When I'm with you
Comments
Really beautifully made!