When It Was For You (Comments First) - Updated
by @kosch
NSFWLiner Notes
OK...so first up...there is some "language"...contained within this, the - perhaps - most un-punk, #punk song ever.. #commentsfirst
I have never written a punk song in my life (let alone one using NASA sound samples...) - but I must thank (blame it on) the intrepid commenters....
@beto "Ha, clever use of limericks for the rhyming structure! I don't remember ever seeing that in a punk song before! Really nice, you've got a banger here!"
@coolparadiso "and not even using a guitar that really surprised me! i'm not even sure what that instrument is!"
@thetau "It has to be a synth. How else could you get it to sound like that. It's that gritty-ness that makes it so Punky" (sorry, about the "gritlessness...")
@kahlo2013 "That kick drum really kicks ass! And that bridge section where the drums go wild has me screaming along!"
@dragondreams "It made me grin to hear some deep space samples from NASA used as a pad in a punk track!"
And as it was already as unpunk as it gets...I figured a little #harmonica couldn't hurt.
All in all, a fun challenge!
Lyrics
When It Was For You
Along came the day that I dreaded
Life's fabric, completely unthreaded
When you said goodbye, with no tears in your eyes,
and nothing about it, regretted
For you. When it was for you.
All for you. When it was for you.
All for you. When it was for you.
The circus of life, we were sharing
On the high wire, we were so daring.
Along came a frown, wearing a clown,
Next thing, my heart, it was tearing.
For you. All for you.
When it was for you..All for you.
When it was for you.
Ahhh....Fuck you, ahhhh.... fuck you!
Fuck You.
Comments
Russ
So good, so good! Well done, this is awesome!