Always Going Somewhere

by @zu_blus

Skirmish: "I've Been Everywhere" an... (@nightwing521)

Liner Notes

Very late to this, but I had a busy time at work. Immediately after reading this prompt I remembered this old hook about "I'm always going that way, don't you worry don't you cry" that I wrote... But I never knew what I meant by THAT way? I wanted to create a story about someone, who always has a plan, even if it looks lifke it's all falling apart, and you lose hope, you can trust them, because they will always show up in need. "You've got a friend in me" vibe. So I was putting a lot of faith in this song and didn't want to touch it in fear of creating a bad song, but this is what this 50-90 challenge is about, so I'm

I'm honestly not very happy with the verses (melody) so if someone feels inspired to change or contunue this song with me I'll be happy to hear about it.
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Lyrics

I know it looks like I'm making this all up
With every move I pick and choose the cost
No rhyme or reason, but not without a care
Believe me when I say

That I'm always going somewhere
Don't you worry don't you cry
And I always have a plan
Don't you worry don't you cry
I will never let you down
Don't you worry don't you cry
I am always by your side
Don't you worry don't you cry

The trust we built is stronger than we thought
Your face betrays the feelings that you've got
I know you think that all we had is lost
But look at what we won

When we’re always going somewhere
Don't you worry don't you cry
And we always have a plan
Don't you worry don't you cry
I will never let you down
Don't you worry don't you cry
I am always by your side
Don't you worry don't you cry

Comments

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I like both melodies a lot. I found I wanted to hear "Don't you worry Don't you cry" one more time at the end of the chorus, possibly with the two phrases broken up, to give the Don't You Cry as much weight as the Don't you worry...Your singing is beautiful and fills the whole thing with so much emotion.
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I really love how this flows! The verses are beautifully written and delivered with your gorgeous vocals. Love the hook as well. It is hard to give any bad review on this one! A constructive comment is that I would love some bridge or outro as it seemed to end abruptly…and if you did this with a couple of vocal tracks it would be cool I think to have the “don’t you worry don’t you cry” layered in harmony under a hold on the last note of the line above it ..
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I really like what you have here so far. First of all, you have a gorgeous voice! I really like the melody and your phrasing. The lyrics are very strong, and I like the structure you have. What I think the song needs is a little work on the transitions from the verse to the chorus, and then probably another verse and maybe a bridge? I would love to work with you on the song if you are interested.
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