Fall With Me

by @andrea

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

#Love #pop #collaborations_welcome

Lyrics

V1
Here you stand right in front of me
With your arms wide open
Eyes as deep as the ocean
Oh how I want to dive in

Your fingers intertwine with mine
Feel the grasp of your hand
And yet I can barely stand
As my world begins to spin

Chorus
Baby when I fall
Are you going to fall with me
Feel the gravity of love
And fall with me
Fall with me
Fall with me

V2
Your ready kiss is on my lips
My pulse begins to race
With excitement that I taste
I'm tumbling head over heals

Whisper words that I wish to hear
I'll give you all of me
Throw away insecurities
Believe what I feel is real

Chorus
Baby when I fall
Are you going to fall with me
Feel the gravity of love
And fall with me
Fall with me
Fall with me

Outro
Say yes
And fall with me
Fall with me
Fall with me



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What a great lyric here. The emotion and promise of the scene is certainly wonderful. Don’t let this one go to sleep.

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Very creative how you said it all, without having to say it all. That's difficult to do, especially lyrically, yet you aced it here with a well-crafted full scene, rather than just an event thrown to the page. Well done! Thx for sharing such intelligent lyric.

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You’ve captured well the heat of the moment. The chorus is outstanding. I like the line “Feel the gravity of love” and how that works with the rest of the lyrics. The verses are awesome too. Nicely written!

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@sunfire

Oooh yeah! This is sooo fine! Very nice. I'm looking forward to hearing the full package.

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@kristi

I like how it's all about the moment. And then the chorus comes in with "fall with me"...both literally and figuratively. Good, concise writing that flows so well!

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Nice tightly written effective lyric full of longing and love that sings off the page!

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@mikeb

Solid write, think it would great musicated with a strong female vocal!

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Had to go take a cold shower after reading that one. Great lyrics! I hope someone puts THIS one to music--I do so enjoy those cold showers...

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Good write, Andrea! I can feel the rhythm as I read the lines.

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@panch

Certainly a touch of the Diane Warrens about this one, I could imagine these in one of her mega power ballads. I really love the emotion in these strong lyrics.

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Anyone has to fall in love with this one! Amazing!