(I Want You To ) Stay With Me

by @tcelliott

Liner Notes

#superskirmish, #songskirmish, #ss100121M, #feast #creepy #stalker #rock

Lyrics

I, I want you to stay with mne
'Cause you, You're all that I"ll ever need
I, I'll do almost anything
For you, Please say you'll wear my ring

You, you're not leaving
Your lies, they're not deceiving
I, I said I love you
So why aren't you believing?
I swear to you that my love is true
So why are you running away, far away from me?

I, I want you to stay with me
To see how happy we both can be
I, I insist that you hang around
With me and this true love that we've found

You, you're not leaving
Your lies, they're not deceiving
I, I said I love you
So why aren't you believing?
I swear to you that my love is true
So why are you running away, far away from me?

You, you're not leaving
Your lies, they're not deceiving
I, I said I love you
So why aren't you believing?
I swear to you that my love is true
So why are you running away, far away from me?



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Parenthetical title first!!!! Love it. This gives me cheap trick meets me first and the gimme gimmes vibes and your voice kinda reminds me of Jerry only a little here so I love that.

Backing vox are perfect very cool tune that you could park and make out to or mosh to (ya, double dangling prepositions I’m not even ashamed)

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Lyrics with a real early 60s feel, but a clear classic rock feel to the arrangement. Yes! I liked this a lot!

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@gubna

I dig it! I was singing along moments after hearing your catchy vocals.

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@andrea

I love the music and vocals. Riding the line between insecurity and controlling. A very cool take on the prompt.

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Nicely delivered on your fav topic! I like the flow and structure and enough grit in the guitar to move it up away from maudling!

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Yeah, that's not creepy at all. 🤣☹️😒 Really great delivery here, especially for a skirmish!! Effective use of certain carefully placed words within the lyrics that differtiate between asking to stay and telling.